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She kept screaming, even as the flesh of her young, featureless face was cleanly cut away by the clergymen, including myself. Most of them screamed, of course, during the ritual flayings, but after the skin around their mouths were torn away from their bodies, they tended to quiet down. Not her. Fo...

I think this was an excellent first post, haha. 'Twas funny and well written. I agree with Scattercat in that the line breaks do well towards the overall flow of it, too.

My next contribution will be both violent and hilarious, scouts honor.

Hickory dickory dock, a mouse ran up a clock. It spun a web, wound up dead, and I stopped leaving out radioactive spiders.

I think I did at least moderately well for my first twabble, haha.

ROU Killing Time wrote:Nice peacekeeper you are packing. welcome aboard.

The trick to being truly bulletproof is to shoot first and ask questions later. It's good to be aboard! Just make sure nobody touches my windmill or I'll fill them full of lead, capishe?

I quite enjoyed this story - it had a sorta whimsical feel to it. It was almost childlike in the way the narration and the prose melded together, but not in a bad way at all. I feel like it really tapped into that inner child, y'know, and I feel that's a pretty hard thing to do well. It definitely b...