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by thebulletproofamish
Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:27 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Living Sacrifice
Replies: 0
Views: 613

Living Sacrifice

She kept screaming, even as the flesh of her young, featureless face was cleanly cut away by the clergymen, including myself. Most of them screamed, of course, during the ritual flayings, but after the skin around their mouths were torn away from their bodies, they tended to quiet down. Not her. Fo...
by thebulletproofamish
Sat Dec 31, 2011 11:55 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: First Date
Replies: 8
Views: 1414

Re: First Date

I think this was an excellent first post, haha. 'Twas funny and well written. I agree with Scattercat in that the line breaks do well towards the overall flow of it, too.
by thebulletproofamish
Sat Dec 31, 2011 11:50 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7552
Views: 882854

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

My next contribution will be both violent and hilarious, scouts honor.
by thebulletproofamish
Sat Dec 31, 2011 10:58 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7552
Views: 882854

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Hickory dickory dock, a mouse ran up a clock. It spun a web, wound up dead, and I stopped leaving out radioactive spiders.

I think I did at least moderately well for my first twabble, haha.
by thebulletproofamish
Sat Dec 31, 2011 1:42 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 226 - The Heroics of Interior Design
Replies: 39
Views: 13319

Re: Drabblecast 226 - The Heroics of Interior Design

ROU Killing Time wrote:Nice peacekeeper you are packing. welcome aboard.
The trick to being truly bulletproof is to shoot first and ask questions later. It's good to be aboard! Just make sure nobody touches my windmill or I'll fill them full of lead, capishe?
by thebulletproofamish
Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:13 pm
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 226 - The Heroics of Interior Design
Replies: 39
Views: 13319

Re: Drabblecast 226 - The Heroics of Interior Design

I quite enjoyed this story - it had a sorta whimsical feel to it. It was almost childlike in the way the narration and the prose melded together, but not in a bad way at all. I feel like it really tapped into that inner child, y'know, and I feel that's a pretty hard thing to do well. It definitely b...