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by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:32 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Footprints in the Sand (probable blasphemy)
Replies: 2
Views: 239

Re: Footprints in the Sand (probable blasphemy)

Ooooh, SNAP! This is a really good one. I love anything that makes fun of the plastic posters plastered all over my school libraries growing up, so this gets a standing ovation from me :)
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cat Whispers
Replies: 3
Views: 241

Re: Cat Whispers

Good stuff. Cats do like to stare. Gotta be at something, right?
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cat Whispers
Replies: 3
Views: 241

Re: Cat Whispers

Good stuff. Cats do like to stare.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:28 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Last Rites
Replies: 3
Views: 311

Re: Last Rites

I liked the early part where the soul was fed to creditors. Felt that was going somewhere interesting. The end is good, but there's something about 'you lived without a soul for years and never noticed' that I find intriguing.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:27 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The New Age Feast
Replies: 2
Views: 348

Re: The New Age Feast

I liked it! Seems like a lot of work to raise and feed a child for just one small meal though.Kudos to their devotion!
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:26 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Wave
Replies: 0
Views: 276

The Wave

You can't run from it. It'll pull you under, drawing you into itself. You'll have to breathe eventually. You are one with the wave and the wave is you. At first, you'll struggle. Then you'll accept it. The wave will take you away. Perhaps it will have mercy and spit you out again in a faraway place....
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Aug 19, 2019 1:03 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Joe
Replies: 0
Views: 246

Joe

I saw him dancing and swaying through the cornfields in the pale moonlight. A husk in tattered rags, his dead limbs creaked like an old barn door. I could feel it as he looked at me from the places where eyes used to be. I've tried to get away from him, but still he follows me. He wants my feet to j...
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:25 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Awakening
Replies: 1
Views: 185

Re: The Awakening

Nice ending.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:24 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Drabble Prompts for Upcoming Shows!
Replies: 20
Views: 24490

Re: Drabble Prompts for Upcoming Shows!

Can we have more prompts please?
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:16 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Old One
Replies: 1
Views: 162

Re: Old One

One of the best I've read in awhile. Good stuff!
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri May 10, 2019 12:59 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Missing Memories
Replies: 1
Views: 257

Re: Missing Memories

I quite liked this! A good little set-up, though I wish more of the governess' intentions could be inferred.
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri May 10, 2019 12:14 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: How To Write A Hit Song
Replies: 4
Views: 486

Re: How To Write A Hit Song

Hmm. I think it's a little clunky. I feel like reworking the idea might help though. The last line is also very on the nose.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:57 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Luck of the Wild
Replies: 4
Views: 503

Re: Luck of the Wild

Mrmf. I feel ill.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:56 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sara
Replies: 6
Views: 738

Re: Sara

Nice. Enjoyed that one.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Aug 11, 2018 4:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cosmic Horror
Replies: 5
Views: 1352

Re: Cosmic Horror

Got a snort outta me.

We could do with more nonviolent 'Om' video games.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Aug 11, 2018 4:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cosmic Horror
Replies: 5
Views: 1352

Re: Cosmic Horror

Got a snort outta me.

We could do with more nonviolent 'Om' video games.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 26, 2018 8:11 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Grammatically Correct
Replies: 1
Views: 1167

Re: Grammatically Correct

Well, a punishment should fit the crime, and there's nothing as horrific as crimes against English.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 26, 2018 8:10 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Steam Engine Defense
Replies: 2
Views: 1813

Re: The Steam Engine Defense

Pffff hahahahahah Why did I ever leave this place? Wonderful.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:41 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 2239

Re: Other People

kwooderson wrote:Yep, a hundred words exactly. Makes sense as far as I can see, though I'm not partial to 'toned inviting physique' -there's something off about it. Hope that helps?
Yup, it does! I think it can be phrased better. Thanks!
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Feb 23, 2017 10:01 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 2239

Other People

How could you, Brian? Why do you possess so little self-control? Why did you have to meet that woman? What was it? The golden hair? Her toned, inviting physique? You’ve kept yourself in check so long. But now I see the true you. I think we'll have to move on to other people. Again! And I'd just gott...