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by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Aug 19, 2019 1:03 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Joe
Replies: 0
Views: 3

Joe

I saw him dancing and swaying through the cornfields in the pale moonlight. A husk in tattered rags, his dead limbs creaked like an old barn door. I could feel it as he looked at me from the places where eyes used to be. I've tried to get away from him, but still he follows me. He wants my feet to j...
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:25 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Awakening
Replies: 1
Views: 16

Re: The Awakening

Nice ending.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:24 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Drabble Prompts for Upcoming Shows!
Replies: 20
Views: 21509

Re: Drabble Prompts for Upcoming Shows!

Can we have more prompts please?
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Aug 18, 2019 9:16 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Old One
Replies: 1
Views: 7

Re: Old One

One of the best I've read in awhile. Good stuff!
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri May 10, 2019 12:59 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Missing Memories
Replies: 1
Views: 163

Re: Missing Memories

I quite liked this! A good little set-up, though I wish more of the governess' intentions could be inferred.
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri May 10, 2019 12:14 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: How To Write A Hit Song
Replies: 4
Views: 260

Re: How To Write A Hit Song

Hmm. I think it's a little clunky. I feel like reworking the idea might help though. The last line is also very on the nose.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:57 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Luck of the Wild
Replies: 4
Views: 380

Re: Luck of the Wild

Mrmf. I feel ill.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 14, 2019 11:56 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sara
Replies: 6
Views: 478

Re: Sara

Nice. Enjoyed that one.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Aug 11, 2018 4:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cosmic Horror
Replies: 4
Views: 1099

Re: Cosmic Horror

Got a snort outta me.

We could do with more nonviolent 'Om' video games.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Aug 11, 2018 4:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cosmic Horror
Replies: 4
Views: 1099

Re: Cosmic Horror

Got a snort outta me.

We could do with more nonviolent 'Om' video games.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 26, 2018 8:11 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Grammatically Correct
Replies: 1
Views: 1088

Re: Grammatically Correct

Well, a punishment should fit the crime, and there's nothing as horrific as crimes against English.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 26, 2018 8:10 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Steam Engine Defense
Replies: 2
Views: 1700

Re: The Steam Engine Defense

Pffff hahahahahah Why did I ever leave this place? Wonderful.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:41 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 2131

Re: Other People

kwooderson wrote:Yep, a hundred words exactly. Makes sense as far as I can see, though I'm not partial to 'toned inviting physique' -there's something off about it. Hope that helps?
Yup, it does! I think it can be phrased better. Thanks!
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Feb 23, 2017 10:01 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 2131

Other People

How could you, Brian? Why do you possess so little self-control? Why did you have to meet that woman? What was it? The golden hair? Her toned, inviting physique? You’ve kept yourself in check so long. But now I see the true you. I think we'll have to move on to other people. Again! And I'd just gott...
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:58 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: We all have mouths, and we must scream...
Replies: 2
Views: 5198

Re: We all have mouths, and we must scream...

Love it. The existential despair of dairy products.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Mr. Mittens’ Transformation
Replies: 1
Views: 1378

Re: Mr. Mittens’ Transformation

Ha! Fun. I like it. I think it might be more effective if you added paragraph breaks. I know it's short, but it would help add 'beats' so that you read through at a certain pace. Like telling a joke - you can't shout it out in one breath. How about this? (I shortened a run-on sentence so you'd have ...
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:33 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: SLEEP
Replies: 3
Views: 2037

Re: SLEEP

Nice, Guns. It's been a while! It's gotten kinda dead on the forums. Letsee if we can wake it up again!
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:58 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7528
Views: 867479

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The devil visits my mother Fridays. She's a good woman - leader, churchgoer, altruist. Yet she looks forward to Friday.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:24 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: "Tea-rannosaurus Rex"
Replies: 4
Views: 1749

Re: "Tea-rannosaurus Rex"

Aww. Nature and mad scientists can be so cruel. Great set-up!
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Jan 18, 2015 11:26 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Things looked bad
Replies: 4
Views: 1861

Re: Things looked bad

Unbeelievable. But what a philosophical conundrum. To bee or not to bee? Bee-ts me.