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by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:41 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 372

Re: Other People

kwooderson wrote:Yep, a hundred words exactly. Makes sense as far as I can see, though I'm not partial to 'toned inviting physique' -there's something off about it. Hope that helps?


Yup, it does! I think it can be phrased better. Thanks!
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Feb 23, 2017 10:01 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Other People
Replies: 2
Views: 372

Other People

How could you, Brian? Why do you possess so little self-control? Why did you have to meet that woman? What was it? The golden hair? Her toned, inviting physique? You’ve kept yourself in check so long. But now I see the true you. I think we'll have to move on to other people. Again! And I'd just gott...
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:58 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: We all have mouths, and we must scream...
Replies: 2
Views: 3625

Re: We all have mouths, and we must scream...

Love it. The existential despair of dairy products.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Mr. Mittens’ Transformation
Replies: 1
Views: 191

Re: Mr. Mittens’ Transformation

Ha! Fun. I like it. I think it might be more effective if you added paragraph breaks. I know it's short, but it would help add 'beats' so that you read through at a certain pace. Like telling a joke - you can't shout it out in one breath. How about this? (I shortened a run-on sentence so you'd have ...
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 8:33 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: SLEEP
Replies: 3
Views: 291

Re: SLEEP

Nice, Guns. It's been a while! It's gotten kinda dead on the forums. Letsee if we can wake it up again!
by MonsieurMoustache
Sat Feb 04, 2017 7:58 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7256
Views: 475306

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The devil visits my mother Fridays. She's a good woman - leader, churchgoer, altruist. Yet she looks forward to Friday.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:24 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: "Tea-rannosaurus Rex"
Replies: 4
Views: 651

Re: "Tea-rannosaurus Rex"

Aww. Nature and mad scientists can be so cruel. Great set-up!
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Jan 18, 2015 11:26 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Things looked bad
Replies: 4
Views: 679

Re: Things looked bad

Unbeelievable. But what a philosophical conundrum. To bee or not to bee? Bee-ts me.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Jan 18, 2015 11:24 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Diamond Cleaning
Replies: 1
Views: 457

Re: Diamond Cleaning

I like the set up for this. It's a nice little window I wouldn't mind seeing expand into something a little longer, with a little conflict and a chance to see him in action on one particular case.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:46 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Citrine
Replies: 6
Views: 1494

Re: Citrine

This brings to mind that most ludicrous of sports, Ferretlegging.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:40 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: New Year, New You
Replies: 2
Views: 494

Re: New Year, New You

Nice to see a new year themed Drabble. Compulsive headhunter? Is his resolution to give up headhunting or to switch to women's heads? I wasn't clear.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Signal
Replies: 5
Views: 831

Re: The Signal

Three by air. I don't mind that they're unexpected - important part of humour. Alternative histories are always enjoyable. Now let's picture a Britain that includes Dinosaurs and mammoths amongst its war machines, perhaps a Germany with dragons and Canada with armies of Sasquatch.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:32 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Family Value
Replies: 3
Views: 608

Re: Family Value

At last we can have a quantifiable value.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:31 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Flipping Point
Replies: 5
Views: 594

Re: The Flipping Point

Also, great Drabble. I get the image of my own mother wandering into a room after I'd discovered her tube of mascara or a jar of peanut butter. I have a feeling Mother Nature's much less forgiving. And my bum still twinges even now.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Jan 08, 2015 12:28 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Flipping Point
Replies: 5
Views: 594

Re: The Flipping Point

Microsoft word is the word counter we use. It usually counts hyphenated words as one.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Jan 05, 2015 8:12 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Forecast calls for Death
Replies: 11
Views: 2165

Re: The Forecast calls for Death

Did you see the latest drabblecast has your drabble, read by moi, in it. One of my favorite readings so far. :) http://www.drabblecast.org/2014/12/07/drabblecast-344-doubleheader-xv/ Oh yes, did I forget to thank you? I've listened to it numerous times and even showed it off I liked it so much. Tha...
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Dec 02, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Our Community
Replies: 10
Views: 1793

Re: Our Community

strawman wrote:I think "wrongly probably" is probably right.
My son's goldfish kept committing suicide by jumping out of their tank.
At least, that's what his cat said.



In a universe where cats talk, suicidal goldfish seem perfectly believable. :)
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Dec 02, 2014 1:23 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Your Move
Replies: 11
Views: 824

Re: Your Move

Welcome to the Forums, Kate! I may have said that already. In any case, stellar drabble. I agree with Strawman, the last bit is an effective twabble, and though I like the opening, that bit stands out so well and says everything that came before it.
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Dec 02, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Under Wraps Hats
Replies: 2
Views: 421

Re: Under Wraps Hats

Fashionable parasites. Great drabble!
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Dec 02, 2014 1:17 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Running Late
Replies: 2
Views: 481

Re: Running Late

Brilliant. Fantastic. I've got my wry smile on it's not there often enough. Sent chills of hilarity down my spine.

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