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by Nevaneva
Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:33 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Nice Costume (Hallowe'en theme)
Replies: 8
Views: 2350

Re: Nice Costume (Hallowe'en theme)

This one is a tonne of fun, loved the ending line especially!
by Nevaneva
Fri Oct 31, 2014 8:22 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Making the Rounds
Replies: 10
Views: 2157

Re: Making the Rounds

unseentangerine wrote:she was so brilliant in her own mind she couldn't be contained by on speciality. That's what I thought.
Well now I'm torn! This and a lack of actual formal education were exactly what I wanted to convey! Thanks for letting me know that it does come through.
by Nevaneva
Fri Oct 31, 2014 3:35 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Making the Rounds
Replies: 10
Views: 2157

Re: Making the Rounds

An issue: (field not yet decided) is a distraction from the flow of the story. It's a bit jarring, and when nothing comes of it, that becomes a shaggy-dog phrase. I'd actually hoped that bit would convey something, but apparently it fell flat. Thanks for the critique, I'm going to rethink how I can...
by Nevaneva
Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:27 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Making the Rounds
Replies: 10
Views: 2157

Making the Rounds

The brilliant young scientist (field not yet decided) slumped resignedly in her chair. Her eyes danced back and forth as if reading the unwritten formulae she was thinking through, not for the first time. It was perfect, the math all checked out. She knew something about this world, a sort of secret...
by Nevaneva
Sat Aug 30, 2014 7:40 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7510
Views: 855533

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Chairman Goodchild wrote: So, you and I are two new users posting their first twabbles and they both contain Hemmingway references.

Strange...
Odd coincidence, I agree!


He shuffled forward, groaning. People had to listen, to see there was no danger! But seeing them he was just so hungry...
by Nevaneva
Fri Aug 29, 2014 10:22 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7510
Views: 855533

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The Time Travellers' League laughed at the apple placed atop the center pin, up to when they knew for whom the Tell bowls.