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by Readerofmuch
Thu Sep 10, 2015 3:48 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Life, or as good as [SUBJECT Things we create]
Replies: 1
Views: 1259

Life, or as good as [SUBJECT Things we create]

The creator smiled. He had finally done it! Life, or as close as he could could get. He wasn't ashamed to admit his neediness, but one day he'd show them. He'd show them ALL the power he held his greasy, pizza covered hands. His creation whirred as its CPU kicked in. It lurched forward, shambling in...
by Readerofmuch
Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:58 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever
Replies: 2
Views: 796

Re: Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever

Interesting. I really like the twist. If you can cut out some of the out of place details this will be spectacular, if it isn't already.
by Readerofmuch
Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:56 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Parbell Plays Too Rough [Category: Things We Made]
Replies: 3
Views: 1252

Re: Parbell Plays Too Rough [Category: Things We Made]

I like the concept, but I wish it were more visible. It's hidden here and difficult to understand. The ending I like, though it is very blunt.