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by jalan1
Mon May 04, 2009 11:20 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Absurdly Connected Machine
Replies: 5
Views: 2611

The Absurdly Connected Machine

The Absurdly Connected Machine Rigorous planning occupies a formless void. Then, with a Bang, dark energy expands outward, winding cosmic strings around galactic superclusters; splashing dust across spiraling sheets of stars. Structures are braided together by gravity, molecules spin and collide. T...
by jalan1
Mon Feb 16, 2009 9:13 pm
Forum: 2009 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: People's Choice Awards -- Voting Here!
Replies: 35
Views: 12468

Honored to be considered again this year!
by jalan1
Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:47 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 054 - Unholy Fruit
Replies: 22
Views: 7214

I liked this story. Rarely do stories effectively pull off this type of mood.
by jalan1
Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:42 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Classics 18 (EP 53) - Sing
Replies: 39
Views: 10883

After listening to it twice, I found myself deep in thought about the possibility of a spirit being tangible to another species's perception, along with thinking about sound itself. the concepts were intriguing enough to cause me to enjoy the story days after listening to it. This mirrors my though...
by jalan1
Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:37 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 057 - The Tiger Fortune
Replies: 36
Views: 9711

Wonderful.
by jalan1
Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:25 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 050 - Trifecta II
Replies: 17
Views: 4378

Also, I really liked that Scam Email- funny!
by jalan1
Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:24 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 050 - Trifecta II
Replies: 17
Views: 4378

My favorite was also the last story, although I really liked "Chi" also. Chi might as well be magic, so to me it didn't really need explaining, it just worked in a mystical sort of way- powering the Earth. Neat to think of mystics or magicians as batteries. Headroom was great but I think would have ...
by jalan1
Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:14 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 047 - The Silver Ring
Replies: 18
Views: 4175

Just catching up on Drabblecasts. I really thought this was a great story, very simple and elegantly written. I wish we had more fairy tales being told these days in short fiction.
by jalan1
Sat Feb 09, 2008 12:11 am
Forum: 2009 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Round 2!
Replies: 8
Views: 4055

Wow, glad my story was well recieved! I seem to have forgotten my password for my other username in this forum- I assure everyone I shall only vote once! ...(although the story I would have voted for isn't here!)