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by DutchessAlyssa
Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:13 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7562
Views: 888523

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The kneeling man offered the small box to the woman he loved. “Oh no,” said Pandora, “I’m not falling for that one again.”
by DutchessAlyssa
Wed Sep 28, 2011 12:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: 6:58 to Riverside
Replies: 2
Views: 1047

Re: 6:58 to Riverside

I really like the set up. You captured the image of rising panic in an enclosed space perfectly. I don't particularly care for the ending though. The last line just falls flat for me. All that wonderful tension that was built up just sort of fizzles out, instead of making me shiver like I was hoping.
by DutchessAlyssa
Tue Sep 27, 2011 9:36 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7562
Views: 888523

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

David wished people would stop staring. After 500 years he still wouldn't forgive Michael for not chiseling him a robe.
by DutchessAlyssa
Mon Nov 22, 2010 11:44 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7562
Views: 888523

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The rescuers pulled the pretty blond girl from the wreckage. Then she shed her protective outer covering, and ate them.