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by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 29, 2011 6:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Elder Fall
Replies: 2
Views: 991

Re: Elder Fall

Having read the short story first I think this drabble feels like its missing something. It is still masterfully written, but I always was one that loved more detail rather than less in a story. Well done sir.
by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:45 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Brainfreeze
Replies: 10
Views: 1599

Re: Brainfreeze

I look forward to reading more of your stuff. This was a good taste of the new flavor you will be bringing to drabblecast (like the ice cream reference?).
by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:15 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: If I Only...
Replies: 7
Views: 1341

Re: If I Only...

He had a brain, with fava beans and a nice chianti.

Wow... I wonder if the scarecrow had been watching too much Walking Dead before this incident...?
by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 08, 2011 7:00 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Majikly Delicious
Replies: 4
Views: 867

Re: Luck and Charmes

Breakfast just became a lot more dangerous for the fay folk.

Zcarter, leave it to you to make a morning meal suddenly a fight for your life...

LOVE IT!!!
by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 08, 2011 6:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sell Yourself
Replies: 7
Views: 1547

Re: Sell Yourself

More like it mirrors my current job.... smh...

Good job on the editing, sir.
by darkladyhalcyon
Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:58 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sell Yourself
Replies: 7
Views: 1547

Re: Sell Yourself

Umm... wow... did you get the job at least?

Now this is a drabble worthy of the zcarter I have come to know and love.

One small editing note... form or from?
by darkladyhalcyon
Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:32 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Some Monsters May Tuck You In
Replies: 12
Views: 2283

Re: Some Monsters May Tuck You In

It is a very beautifully written piece despite the story. I definitely would vote for version one because of the economy of words. And it shows that things that should frighten a little boy "under normal circumstances" don't but that things that shouldn't frighten him do.
by darkladyhalcyon
Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:23 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Beckoned by My Beverage
Replies: 8
Views: 1046

Re: Beckoned by My Beverage

OMG!!! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!!!! Zen and I laughed our asses off!!!