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by ventricle
Tue Mar 22, 2011 4:49 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7320
Views: 702236

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

I have always been a very flighty person, my mother said. My sister kept her feet on the ground. It’s because of the nails.
by ventricle
Thu Feb 24, 2011 12:11 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 198 - Love in the Pneumatic Tube Era
Replies: 32
Views: 5197

Re: Drabblecast 198 - Love in the Pneumatic Tube Era

Anyway, my opinion is that Tom was being self-critical of his own opinion. Romantic dystopia... sounds like a newly discovered territory of strangeness. Very well written, but I need to listen again to understand better where the pneumatic tubes come in. Of course I was... the only other person her...
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:25 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Poked to death
Replies: 9
Views: 2070

Re: Poked to death

I like it. The narrator's obliviousness is just plausible enough to be disturbing rather than merely silly. Good idea. Needs a rewrite, though, or at least reformatting. Paragraphs! It's also a bit unclear what the machine is. "Machine of Death" sounds like a machine that causes death. This machine...
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 7:06 am
Forum: Don't be Shy...
Topic: Mr. Prude
Replies: 19
Views: 4211

Re: Mr. Prude

normsherman wrote:

Maybe I'm getting more unscrupulous and gaudy these days.
keep getting more both.

you are a diamond-studded butterfly on a poison-tipped tie pin, norm.
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:53 am
Forum: 2010 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Vote Here! Best Feature Story
Replies: 51
Views: 14956

Re: Vote Here! Best Feature Story

Me neither. Good piece, but not best 'o year. You quote by clicking on "quote" in the top right of the message.[/quote]

thanks. now how do i stop that woman from expanding and contracting before my eyes all the time?
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:20 am
Forum: 2010 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Vote Here! Best Feature Story
Replies: 51
Views: 14956

Re: Vote Here! Best Feature Story

fantasy jumper? me either.

i also don't understand how to quote.
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:20 am
Forum: 2010 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Vote Here! Best Feature Story
Replies: 51
Views: 14956

Re: Vote Here! Best Feature Story

and morris and the machine just made me sad.

so did fantasy jumper, actualy.
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:18 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 198 - Love in the Pneumatic Tube Era
Replies: 32
Views: 5197

Re: Drabblecast 198 - Love in the Pneumatic Tube Era

"the only bad guy is transport canada, and he's not even that bad"

wow. this was the most dystopic and the most romantic story i have yet heard here.
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:01 am
Forum: 2010 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Vote Here! Best Feature Story
Replies: 51
Views: 14956

Re: Vote Here! Best Feature Story

I UNDERSTAND THAT I AM ALONE IN THIS
by ventricle
Wed Feb 23, 2011 5:53 am
Forum: 2010 Drabblecast People's Choice Awards
Topic: Vote Here! Best Feature Story
Replies: 51
Views: 14956

Re: Vote Here! Best Feature Story

last great clown hunt was really good, but i listened to mongoose at least 3 times.

i personally don't understand the mad Tim Pratt love, never have.
by ventricle
Sat Jan 22, 2011 10:10 pm
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 195 - A Matter of Size
Replies: 49
Views: 6005

Re: Drabblecast 195- A Matter of Size by Robert Jeschonek

even if the child porn thing was not "child" porn, it was still rape FOR SOMEONE'S OWN GOOD which is pretty freaken disturbing. also, the way that i heard the story was that the fact that Manchild could revert to a childhood self was the result of some traumatic event that had trapped him at a point...
by ventricle
Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:19 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 195 - A Matter of Size
Replies: 49
Views: 6005

Re: Drabblecast 195- A Matter of Size by Robert Jeschonek

fyi, spoilers: yeah, this story was really freaking intense. it is totally dark without seeming to take ANYTHING seriously. It throws you into this adult world where everything is effed up sex and violence. The 'super-heros' are ludicrous. the main character's name is "manchild", which is completely...