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by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Dec 03, 2013 11:29 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Pardon Our Progress (2014 theme)
Replies: 4
Views: 436

Re: Pardon Our Progress (2014 theme)

Hah hah, another bit of brilliance! I, for one, plan to use my new arms to multitask. I'll dedicate two specifically to writing, while the cancerous growth on my brain deals with day-today stuff with the other assorted limbs.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Nov 28, 2013 8:00 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Oubliette
Replies: 7
Views: 798

Re: Oubliette

Hey there, welcome to the Drab. It's more exciting than my abbreviation makes it sound.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Nov 25, 2013 7:23 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Deck the Hells (Holiday Stories Theme)
Replies: 14
Views: 1566

Re: Deck the Hells (Holiday Stories Theme)

Dyslexia causes so much excess paperwork. Satan and Santa indeed. Let the Xmas drabs begin!
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:37 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Dragon Seed
Replies: 5
Views: 731

Re: Dragon Seed

Loved this one! Fun rhymes, good imagery, pacing - all around brilliant. Wouldn't mind more in this style.
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:34 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme
Replies: 6
Views: 732

Re: Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme

"This is the song that doesn't end. Yes, it goes on and on my friend. Some people started singing it not knowing what it was, And they'll continue singing it forever just because . . ." Quiet, you fool, or you'll infect the planet again! Too late...already I feel my brain being overloaded with an e...
by MonsieurMoustache
Mon Nov 18, 2013 12:31 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Lab Rat (Perfect weapon gone awry theme)
Replies: 6
Views: 1110

Re: Lab Rat (Perfect weapon gone awry theme)

Wonderful rewrite!
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 10:05 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7578
Views: 909368

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Rhyming is hard in a twabble. Yup, so's punctuation. And, having both is extra fun. ;) A well made rhyme is quite sublime a poor one rather childish But if you bash my poetry I'll bash you back most wildish-ly. Dr. Suess I ain't, it's true But you have made me rather blue Tell me my mistake, Algern...
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 9:58 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme
Replies: 6
Views: 732

Re: Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme

I'm a huge fan of Monty P. A few years ago I even attempted to translate the 'joke'. I'll admit I did think of it when I was writing the drabble, although it was more inspired by a day of terrible earworms. Glad I encouraged some people to reread it.
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:28 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Exponential Growth (Simulation theme)
Replies: 13
Views: 3320

Re: Exponential Growth (Simulation theme)

No prob, Chek. You have excellent drabbles, no need to doubt yourself.
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:24 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7578
Views: 909368

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

The plumber beat back the tentacles, reaching for the flush lever. Why didn't parents buy their kids goldfish anymore?
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:14 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7578
Views: 909368

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Jenifer never brushes her hair
Which is why I now live there
Since my roots reached her brain
Jen's not been quite the same


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Rhyming is hard in a twabble.
by MonsieurMoustache
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:00 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme
Replies: 6
Views: 732

Sing-a-Long Apocalypse - Perfect Weapon Theme

We thought it’d be the biologists and physicists who destroyed civilization. Roger Enkleheimer was a commercial jingle composer for Cheezychewz snackfood. During the War his lyrics were the last words of many dying soldiers. Even those of the Enemy. Enkleheimer was ordered to weaponize ditties. He d...
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:48 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Exponential Growth (Simulation theme)
Replies: 13
Views: 3320

Re: Exponential Growth (Simulation theme)

Fantastic drabble. One of my new faves!
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:23 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Lab Rat (Perfect weapon gone awry theme)
Replies: 6
Views: 1110

Re: Lab Rat (Perfect weapon gone awry theme)

Good concept, but the 'he' was ambiguous enough in the last paragraph that I wasn't sure if it referred to the rat or the doctor (though you had previously referred to the rat as it, I still couldn't be sure). Consider changing it to 'the doctor' to help with clarification. Also, an inventor? Wouldn...
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:19 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Electric Bug (Simulations Theme)
Replies: 8
Views: 904

Re: The Electric Bug (Simulations Theme)

Hilarious concept.
by MonsieurMoustache
Thu Nov 14, 2013 11:18 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Name Theft
Replies: 1
Views: 270

Re: Name Theft

Neat little POV piece.
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Nov 05, 2013 5:50 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Days of Rain
Replies: 7
Views: 2309

Re: Days of Rain

Aw. But does this mean chickens are being slaughtered and cooked in the clouds? Poor chickens.
by MonsieurMoustache
Sun Oct 27, 2013 10:13 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Externalities
Replies: 2
Views: 434

Re: Externalities

Intense. I get the feeling this actor's been out of work for awhile... I can see why.
by MonsieurMoustache
Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:53 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7578
Views: 909368

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Gary brushes religiously
But has bad cavities
He sleeps with his mouth open all night
To tooth fairy's hungry delight.