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by PB&Jellyphish320
Sun Oct 05, 2014 3:18 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: By Proxy
Replies: 11
Views: 3820

Re: Dolly Ma

Interesting view of Clotho, who not only spins the thread but sews with it. I have a confession. This wasn't intended to be Clotho. I didn't even know who Clotho was until after the comment and I had to go look it up. :( But I so enjoyed the compliment. It's really just the ghost of a woman who die...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:21 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Broken Promise (Halloween)
Replies: 31
Views: 11113

Re: Broken Promise (Halloween)

I love the use of Whom over Who. If I'd said Who, I'd have felt I needed to tack a Doctor in front of it. :) Not that I'm overly strict about grammar myself. I'm glad the author approves of the production. :D You've got me giggling over here. Honestly, I used "who" originally, but the little green ...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Sat Oct 04, 2014 1:47 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Broken Promise (Halloween)
Replies: 31
Views: 11113

Re: Broken Promise (Halloween)

Well, I enjoyed this one so much I just had to produce it for the dribblecast. I trust no one will mind. I even tried out adding some creepy music as background. http://www.dribblecast.org/2014/10/03/dribblecast-163-broken-promise/ Again, I hope it pleases. Wow! That actually just made my day :D Ha...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Mon Sep 29, 2014 8:56 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Broken Promise (Halloween)
Replies: 31
Views: 11113

Re: Broken Promise (Halloween)

Thanks everybody! I'm happy you liked it! and Penman Bland: This is a warning to all living mortals . . . . ;)
by PB&Jellyphish320
Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:01 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Broken Promise (Halloween)
Replies: 31
Views: 11113

Broken Promise (Halloween)

The fools had won. Halloween, in America, was dead. No children disguised as monsters. No treats in exchange for mercy. No homage to the Dark Gods. Everyone had forgotten the promises of their ancestors – everyone but the ancients to whom the pact was made. So few understood those darkening clouds t...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Sun Sep 28, 2014 11:42 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Windows of the Soul?
Replies: 8
Views: 2256

Re: Windows of the Soul?

Ooohhh this is Terribly nice! Attention getting title, and and marvelously cold character. Good job!
by PB&Jellyphish320
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:17 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Everyone knows it’s your Parents : Conspiracy Theory Theme
Replies: 12
Views: 2007

Re: Everyone knows it’s your Parents : Conspiracy Theory The

MonsieurMoustache wrote:
strawman wrote:My parents told me Charon took all the teeth to Hades on the tooth ferry...

Pfff...nice. But I'm curious what the God of Death does with them. I challenge you to drabble that.

*this is me attempting to like this challenge - Facebook style :D
by PB&Jellyphish320
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:15 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Everyone knows it’s your Parents : Conspiracy Theory Theme
Replies: 12
Views: 2007

Re: Everyone knows it’s your Parents : Conspiracy Theory The

Just got back from the dentist myself. So this one found a tender spot in my smile. Nice job.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:02 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Plain Sight
Replies: 7
Views: 1583

Re: Plain Sight

I agree with strawman and monsieurmoustache about shuffling around the order. Besides that you've got a pretty charming little Halloween story.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Tue Sep 23, 2014 3:54 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Dimension less
Replies: 4
Views: 1337

Re: Dimension less

Yeah, you didn't have to explain the song. I totally recognized it.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Tue Sep 16, 2014 12:36 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Twabble censorship
Replies: 22
Views: 9864

Re: Twabble censorship

My best friend in the whole world was transgender, prior to this death last year. I found this funny, and I know he would have too. Transgender people can be very sensitive about their condition but you shouldn't give up writing because you got a rise out of somebody! Isn't that what writer's do af...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Sun Sep 14, 2014 2:37 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Acrostic Twabble Challenge
Replies: 58
Views: 22051

Re: Acrostic Twabble Challenge

After another late shift Cecelia Rode the late bus home Only this night She wasn’t alone The driver In back Came along too Been watching way too much Criminal Minds, and this twabble actually crept up in my memory when I had to walk home yesterday because my car stopped working! Thanks for the para...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Sun Sep 14, 2014 2:32 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Ablutophobia
Replies: 3
Views: 1019

Re: Ablutophobia

:) Thanks for the comments guys! :)
by PB&Jellyphish320
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:10 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7655
Views: 1074108

Struck Dumb

"The cat looked deep in my eyes and swallowed. I reacted in vain. It was gone. I was speechless." Potentially fun, but that's way too short to be a twabble . :( Alright, take two: My fiance's feline perched on my chest. It stared at me then swallowed. I reacted in vain. It was gone. I was speechles...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:22 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Ablutophobia
Replies: 3
Views: 1019

Ablutophobia

She had soap in her eyes. So she didn’t see the thing now swimming in the water with her. She hadn’t seen it eek out from that little opening between the faucet and the drain. She hadn’t seen it drifting past her toes. She heard it though. It was a sound like water rolling over water, creating a cur...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:40 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Tattoo
Replies: 4
Views: 1274

Re: Tattoo

This is pretty cool.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:31 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Truth Hurts Donut
Replies: 3
Views: 1183

Re: Truth Hurts Donut

Haha! This is funny. Don't dish it out if you don't like the taste of it.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Mon Sep 08, 2014 2:26 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Acrostic Twabble Challenge
Replies: 58
Views: 22051

Re: Acrostic Twabble Challenge

Always being careless, Deloras eats fritters gnomes have influenced. Juan knew little men naturally ogle pastries. Fine attempt, but it's way too short to be a twabble . Always being careless Deloras eats fritters gnomes have influenced. Juan knew little men naturally oppose pastries. One word diff...
by PB&Jellyphish320
Mon Sep 08, 2014 2:12 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Acrostic Twabble Challenge
Replies: 58
Views: 22051

Re: Acrostic Twabble Challenge

MonsieurMoustache wrote:Verna wrangled xylophonists (yummy, zesty) - Aim? Bake cakes designed edible for gooby horned insects. Just kidding!

And I'm never doing it again...
Wow. The imagery on all these is so entertaining though!
And yea, this prompt was super hard but super fun.
by PB&Jellyphish320
Fri Sep 05, 2014 5:29 pm
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Acrostic Twabble Challenge
Replies: 58
Views: 22051

Re: Acrostic Twabble Challenge

Always being careless, Deloras eats fritters gnomes have influenced. Juan knew little men naturally ogle pastries.