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by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:06 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Membership (Belonging Theme)
Replies: 1
Views: 588

Membership (Belonging Theme)

This was his last chance. He knew what another failure would mean. Being disbarred from the Society would have grave consequences for the rest of his life. He held steady and watched the bushes for any movement. As the target exploded into view, the hunter carefully lined up the sights and squeezed ...
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 02, 2012 5:25 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Drabble poem: The Night Sky
Replies: 6
Views: 1801

Re: Drabble poem: The Night Sky

That's good.
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 02, 2012 5:20 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: A Giving Spirit
Replies: 1
Views: 395

A Giving Spirit

She raised her hand, palm up, and the delicate paper bird flew away. "Whose is that, honey?" her father asked. "Sarah's. She pulled my hair today, so I'm giving her the bird. I'm giving one to everybody who made me mad." Her father chuckled, then drew in breath to clarify the idiom. His breath caugh...
by uncre8d1
Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:06 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: William's Tale
Replies: 10
Views: 1102

Re: William's Tale

Good drabble.

But: "the *worst* thing was the torture."
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 9:56 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Vanguard
Replies: 4
Views: 1143

Re: Vanguard

Ah, it all becomes clear now. Also, my nipples explode with delight.
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:30 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Vanguard
Replies: 4
Views: 1143

Re: Vanguard

Maybe it's just sleep deprivation, but I don't get this one.
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:27 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Cloud and Sky
Replies: 8
Views: 1392

Re: Cloud and Sky

Bump for alien theme
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:22 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: The Beast
Replies: 4
Views: 790

Re: The Beast

Love it.
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:19 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Micah 4:3
Replies: 5
Views: 1146

Re: Micah 4:3

strawman wrote: Great drabble. However, Micah 4:3 can't be the original machine name, as it was repurposed.
Maybe the original name was Micah 1:4 - "The mountains melt beneath Him,and the valleys split apart, like wax before a fire, like water rushing from a steep place."
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 8:03 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: how to deal
Replies: 6
Views: 1327

Re: how to deal

Thanks! I had the idea while watching 'The Woman in Black.' I figured reverse psychology might be useful in a haunting.
by uncre8d1
Thu Mar 01, 2012 4:24 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: how to deal
Replies: 6
Views: 1327

how to deal

I always scream upon opening my underwear drawer. I feign terror when I come home to a tidy house, and if there's a hot dinner on the table I hide in my bed (at least until the food cools a bit). A clean car gets a fainting spell, while a trimmed lawn merits a fake heart attack. Anything can be addr...
by uncre8d1
Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:32 pm
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Snuggle
Replies: 3
Views: 1436

Re: Snuggle

Oh, creepy. I'm glad my daughter has a lamb instead of a bear.
by uncre8d1
Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:25 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7593
Views: 970027

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Good point, though I only ever imagined a light-bending effect (which would end up the same, except you'd be standing on black footprints all the time - no light to bend between foot and ground).
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 5:07 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7593
Views: 970027

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

So yeah. I met God the other day. He's okay. Makes a mean caramel mocha. Has a Karmann Ghia.
Oh, did you write out that will?
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:49 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7593
Views: 970027

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

Thanks.
(First forum visit in months) + (insomnia) + (a whole box of orange Tic-Tacs, absently devoured) = twabbles!
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:44 am
Forum: Drabbles
Topic: Pet Stains
Replies: 5
Views: 709

Re: Pet Stains

Very nice. It hearkens back to the 'Hitchhiker's Guide' vignette about a mathematical error causing an entire alien invasion to be swallowed by a dog. I always liked that bit, but I actually prefer this way - treating it as a slice of domestic life. Also, your 'sound effects' remind me of every cat ...
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:31 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 213 - The Haunter of the Dark
Replies: 13
Views: 5791

Re: Drabblecast 213 - The Haunter of the Dark

Big Lovecraft fan. I think I have all his published, extant work. Granted, some of them seem more like revisions of earlier stories than original work, but I like all of them.

@Unblinking: agreed, it's hard to beat 'Erich Zann,' though I would propose 'Pickman's Model' as a contender...
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:25 am
Forum: Story Discussion - Main and Drabbleclassics
Topic: Drabblecast 216 - The Book of Eternity
Replies: 34
Views: 11047

Re: Drabblecast 216 - The Book of Eternity

I'm a fan of Mike Resnick. This was not my favorite story of his, but it did have the distinction of being a Resnick story that did not make me want to cry. :cry: While I enjoy a story well told and don't always expect a twist, I think this one could have benefited from a dusting of M. Night. A veer...
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:10 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7593
Views: 970027

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

She looms over me, and they sway in perfect unison before my eyes, twin mesmerizing pendulums.
"Tie those laces for me?"
by uncre8d1
Fri Sep 30, 2011 4:05 am
Forum: Twit-Fic!
Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
Replies: 7593
Views: 970027

Re: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)

As the door opens, the beast rushes me, its slavering maw gaping as it pins me to the floor.
Yes, yes, I love you too, buddy.