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- Tue Oct 22, 2013 3:55 am
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Shootin the Breeze
- Replies: 1
- Views: 749
Re: Shootin the Breeze
I like the weird, country vibe of the story. It makes you wonder if the old man knows something nobody else does or if he's just old and crazy. Lol My suggestions: I'd take out the "and" in the first sentence and make it into two sentences. Saying that the sound was incomplete without the click of t...
- Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:58 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Thoughts At the Mirror
- Replies: 2
- Views: 546
Re: Thoughts At the Mirror
Hahaha I didn't notice that, Strawman, but it works! I just reread this and I wanna tinker with it later when I have time. I used "body" too often.
- Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:17 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Thoughts At the Mirror
- Replies: 2
- Views: 546
Thoughts At the Mirror
I came not to the decision lightly. Though it wasn’t really a decision at all, as I saw no other options. It started an infrequent event, whilst staring at the computer or television. As time progressed, so did the twitch. My eye, like a thing possessed, followed not the natural rhythms of my body, ...
- Thu Oct 17, 2013 5:45 pm
- Forum: Twit-Fic!
- Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
- Replies: 7953
- Views: 1499670
Re: Many hands make light work
Moving in. 9 flights of stairs. Offer to lend a hand. I wish I'd gotten his name or digits. This thing's starting to smell. Aw, man, he gave you the hand without the digits? Talk about rude! :P I know it was an unnecessary pun...but I couldn't help myself!!! Plus, I thought Varda would get a chuckl...
- Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:58 pm
- Forum: Twit-Fic!
- Topic: Post your Twitfic Twabbles Here! (General Content)
- Replies: 7953
- Views: 1499670
Many hands make light work
Moving in. 10 flights of stairs.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.
Edit: Fixed confusion in line 2.
He offered to lend a hand.
I wish I got his name or digits.
This thing's starting to smell.
Edit: Fixed confusion in line 2.
- Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:11 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Our Zombie Apocalypse Pact (Somebody's Gotta Do It Theme)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1608
Re: Our Zombie Apocalypse Pact (Somebody's Gotta Do It Theme
Love love LOVE this line!Varda wrote:Yes, but you only want me for my brains.

- Thu Oct 17, 2013 4:02 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: All These Worlds Are Yours
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2658
Re: All These Worlds Are Yours
I didnt get the reference until reading the comments. Loved the word choice on this one. it read like the army. In fact, i could almost imagine snake doc from the unit reading this one. I do not know what the actor's name is but he does the allstate commercials now days. Yes!! I got goodebumps at i...
- Sun Oct 13, 2013 3:29 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Sparkle Party
- Replies: 3
- Views: 996
Re: Sparkle Party
Absurdly lovely! Hahaha
- Fri Oct 11, 2013 2:54 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: All These Worlds Are Yours
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2658
Re: All These Worlds Are Yours
Ha! Just saw this! Thank you, Varda!!
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 4:49 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2689
Re: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
Strange as this thread is, it does illustrate the absolute importance of cultural frame of reference. Max Schreck... Bella Lugosi... Lon Cheney... Dick Cheney... Robert Pattinson...???? LOLZ @ Dick Cheney Shudders @ Robert Pattenson You are absolutely right! There are so many different "versions" o...
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 4:21 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: South of Heaven
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2967
Re: South of Heaven
Though I am not positive, I believe there should be commas after "below" and "above."
Also, the second "up" in the first paragraph seems redundant to me. Though when trying to reach 100 words, I understand it's necessity!
Also, the second "up" in the first paragraph seems redundant to me. Though when trying to reach 100 words, I understand it's necessity!
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 4:12 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2689
Re: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
. So, in terms of interior logic, the "Fatal error" part doesn't make sense. The Elder is a fellow vampire, no? Is there some vampire taboo that discourages creating more vampires? Or is it just a mistake to be talking about interior logic here? :) Good question. I guess I imagine the counsel is bl...
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 3:22 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2689
Re: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
Hmmm...I got rid of the original title because I thought it was hokey but perhaps it made that clearer. The original title read: CHANNEL 3 BREAKING NEWS: Serial Killer Terrorizes City This young, inexperienced vampire attacked her would-be assailant and inadvertently turned him into a vampire. He pr...
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 3:13 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: South of Heaven
- Replies: 11
- Views: 2967
Re: South of Heaven
With my moral compass as a guide, the road hell is paved with good intentions. I disagree. <--see signature below :P--> I really like the story. It makes me want to know more about the character. Why would he work so hard to get to hell? I like the idea of the moral compass being portrayed as an ac...
- Thu Oct 10, 2013 3:06 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2689
Re: CHANNEL 3 BREAKING NEWS: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
Thanks for the suggestion! I've worked the eliminate those words and make the story dialogue only. You were definitely correct!Flintknapper wrote:Strange. I am ususally not a big dialogue only fan, but in this case, I would work with it to get rid of Luna lowering eyes in shame and make it dialogue only.
- Fri Sep 27, 2013 6:09 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: ...a Thought Experiment.
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2110
Re: ...a Thought Experiment.
Hahahaha! I adore this! Thank you for sharing!!
- Fri Sep 27, 2013 5:56 pm
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Serial Killer Terrorizes City
- Replies: 10
- Views: 2689
Serial Killer Terrorizes City
Edited per suggestion. Thank you!! “I asked him to stop. He didn’t listen, sir.” “When he continued, you followed modus operandi?” “I did, Elder Drear. I bared my teeth and attempted to cast intimidation. He persisted.” “Please, Luna, tell the council what happened next.” “The door behind him was t...
- Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:00 am
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Exponential Growth (Simulation theme)
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4375
Re: Exponential Growth (Simulations theme)
Talk about population control....
- Wed Sep 25, 2013 1:55 am
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: Making New Friends (Simulation Theme)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1623
Re: Making New Friends (Simulation Theme)
Poor, strange Nolan....
I like it! Creepy
I like it! Creepy

- Tue Sep 24, 2013 3:30 am
- Forum: Drabbles
- Topic: All These Worlds Are Yours
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2658
Re: All These Worlds Are Yours
When I wrote this, my mind was actually in the realm of 2010: Odyssey Two by Arthur C. Clarke.strawman wrote:Yes. Thinking this drabble might have that as a backstory.