Hi Maplesugar, good to see you and your delicious candy avatar over here.
This story was awesome! My favorite Drabblecast to date. It used Carroll and Lovecraft to the best possible degree, giving nods to each, but not being a slave to their material. Mongoose was a great character, and I loved the hierarchy of transdimensional beasties, including the names. I think it was the right move to leave the Bandersnatch off-screen, so that we could just imagine how bad it could be based on its inferiors in the hierarchy.
So far I think this is the only multi-part Drabblecast story I've liked. With others, I just felt they were too long to deserve multiple episodes, and they didn't keep my interest up. But this one filled out its space very nicely, and I'd be happy to see the further adventures of mongoose.
My only questions are: when can I expect to see the Anime cartoon of this? And the video game FPS version?