Drabblecast 086 - Half-Sneeze Johnny

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McToad
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Great read, flat story

Postby McToad » Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:45 pm

Great read and good use of music and sound. However, the story itself didn't work for me. The character was flat, his Gatsby just wasn't that interesting, and the actual plot was neither interesting nor clearly conveyed (for example the only motivation given is greed...but its not really explored in a meaningful way). That left an entertaining production, but not something I'll listen to again or recommend to anyone.

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Re: Drabblecast 086 - Half-Sneeze Johnny

Postby sandrilde » Mon Apr 29, 2013 6:22 pm

Clever but I had trouble believing anyone would have this particular sneezing impediment (and even more trouble believing it woudl be combined with a perfect ability to since deception from others) -

Coudln't quite buy it, but kinda fun.

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Re: Drabblecast 086 - Half-Sneeze Johnny

Postby hellena.xantia » Mon Jan 16, 2017 1:14 pm

a very good story, reminded me of an Italian-American movie about mafia.


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