Feel like I'm living in an alternative universe this week... (my feedback on this week's B-Side
, Sorry About Your Dog)
I liked this story, although I was a bit unclear about how the girl managed to dispose of her would-be killers. Were they just crap at their chosen passtime? Is there something I missed in the plot and characters... or some serial killer "givens" that would explain events?
I thought the ending was a bit weak, though. It didn't seem to fit with the style and mood of the rest of the story, coming across as a bit silly, rather than creepy / scary / weird, as if the author had decided to wrap it up without a lot of further thought.