The Offering

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The Offering

Post by F5iver » Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:56 pm

Shuffling through the dumpster, I find the little bits of rind, grounds and spoiled meat. I slather them onto my coat yet again, and search the next dumpster, and the next. Foolish people, throwing away that which is so desired by… the others. Each dumpster yields its treasures, and my coat's covering is complete. Colors blend, the odors mingle.

Home, I remove the coat and lay it flat on the bed, delicacies facing up. Naked and oiled, I roll, becoming one with the offering. And I wait for them to come and feast, like each night that has come before.

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Re: The Offering

Post by ROU Killing Time » Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:15 am

Oooh, that is just full of unexplained creepiness.
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Re: The Offering

Post by munsi » Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:47 am

yeah, i've read this over a few times. weird, and disturbing. i like it very well

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Re: The Offering

Post by strawman » Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:54 am

The Incubus Diaries
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Re: The Offering

Post by Phenopath » Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:08 pm

raccoons?
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Re: The Offering

Post by strawman » Thu Feb 04, 2010 8:39 pm

Dog? Cat? Carl Solomon?
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Re: The Offering

Post by F5iver » Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:08 pm

strawman wrote:Dog? Cat? Carl Solomon?
Let the coolcat kitty HOWL!

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