Tickle Time.

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ZuSquared
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Tickle Time.

Post by ZuSquared » Thu Jun 24, 2010 6:21 am

I spin and fall back into giant, outstretched arms.

I am a fairy, with tin foil wings, and you are a black bearded pirate, torturing me with tickles. Aglow with joy, I relax against your chest.

Abruptly the air becomes stale. Has IT come to play ? Again?

The last tickle goes on too long and in a place where a tickle shouldn't be. I try and wriggle away but your hand follows, determined.

Yes, IT is here. Once friendly, black eyes now vacant, unfamiliar.

Then, 'SNAP!' IT is gone.

"Who wants a soda?" you say.

I nod.

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Re: Tickle Time.

Post by strawman » Thu Jun 24, 2010 12:19 pm

Wow, is that creepy.
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Re: Tickle Time.

Post by gustomaestro » Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:01 pm

Strong sense of mood created, swiftly subverted. Great.

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Re: Tickle Time.

Post by Phenopath » Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:20 pm

That was nasty.
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