Deeper Than You Know

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Scattercat
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Deeper Than You Know

Post by Scattercat » Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:28 pm

"Ready? One... two... three... CANNONBALL!" Robbie ran three steps onto the board, bounced once, and tumbled into the water, arms wrapped tightly around his legs. The splash was tremendous, reaching above the still-quivering diving board.

Robbie surfaced to the cheers and whoops of his friends. He waved and basked in their admiration. Only Erika wore and expression of concern, watching the water ripple and thrash, the surface growing more agitated. Her eyes widened when the translucent muzzle of a huge, watery artillery gun began to form out at the deep end.

None of them were prepared for the return fire.

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Re: Deeper Than You Know

Post by gustomaestro » Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:23 am

Quite an eccentric and inventive piece. Nicely offbeat.

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Re: Deeper Than You Know

Post by stakultexsun » Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:29 am

that is good!

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