The Man at the Bar of the Pub

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Foxfyre Recluse
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The Man at the Bar of the Pub

Post by Foxfyre Recluse » Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:40 am

I swear to God, that man at the bar has been looking at me ever since I came in. I hope I’m not giving myself away. I can feel the tension building up inside of me.

They all deserved to die anyway. They were a bunch of pigs with their high flatulent ways. How dare they discharge my discovery and my creation?

Now the man at the bar is approaching me. I have given myself away. He has his hand in his pocket, God knows what's in there. That’s okay, I’m ready for him. I still have one bullet left.


Based off the drabble The Man in the Corner of the Pub
Umm... left then right

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Re: The Man at the Bar of the Pub

Post by flyawaybefree » Mon Aug 02, 2010 6:03 am

I like this one- together the two make a really good pair. The ending is great too.
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

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