Just Like Bella

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Just Like Bella

Post by babydyke » Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:25 am

Camryn stared at his perfect hair and porcelain skin. “You’re beautiful,” she squeaked. “I love you.”

“Look, kid,” the vampire said in a thick Brooklyn accent, “Seventeen and you think you’re too jaded for life? I survived the seventies. Fucking Nixon. Besides, I don’t do jailbait and,” he added, sniffing, “you’re anorexic? Makes you anemic. I wouldn’t bite you, much less spend eternity listening to you angst.”

He disappeared. Camryn spat bitter dust as she dropped the stake and hugged her beloved book. She’d been wrong about that one, but she wouldn’t give up until she found her immortal Adonis.
A hard heart is no infallible protection against a soft head. ~C.S. Lewis

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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by monsata » Thu Sep 09, 2010 7:17 am

I absolutely love this.
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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by flyawaybefree » Thu Sep 09, 2010 2:17 pm

you are absolutely brilliant.
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
-Dr. Seuss

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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by munsi » Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:19 pm

twisted, in a very perfect way. welcome to the forums, glad to have you here :D

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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by babydyke » Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:27 pm

*blushes* :oops: Wow, thanks guys. I'm glad you like. I enjoyed writing it.
A hard heart is no infallible protection against a soft head. ~C.S. Lewis

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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by mrsmica » Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:15 am

I love it, AND your sig. :D

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Re: Just Like Bella

Post by uncre8d1 » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:19 am

that's great, BD.

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