Too Much Information

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Rish Outfield
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Too Much Information

Post by Rish Outfield » Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:18 pm

"The body's right here, Detective," Officer Forko said as Rushtin came in. The dead girl was on her basement floor, still clutching her cellphone.
The policeman beside Rushtin shifted from one leg to another. "Now that you're here, you mind if I use the restroom?"
Rushtin shrugged. "Like the song says, be our guest."
Before leaving, Forko handed the detective the printout from the 911 call.
She had been texting the authorities, explaining her danger, but hadn't yet described her assailant. She'd only gotten one hundred characters through before she was cut off.
"Damned Twitter claims another one," Rushtin muttered.

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Re: Too Much Information

Post by cdugger » Wed Oct 27, 2010 12:19 pm

You really don't like texting of any kind, do you?
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Re: Too Much Information

Post by zcarter80 » Sun Nov 14, 2010 8:43 am

this one was very cool. I liked the build up. We need to see more drabbles from you my man.
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Re: Too Much Information

Post by mrsmica » Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:07 am

The other day my friend sent a text that just said "car accident"
(she was fine)

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Re: Too Much Information

Post by strawman » Tue Nov 16, 2010 3:26 pm

Why didn't you reply, "plane crash"?
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Re: Too Much Information

Post by mrsmica » Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:41 pm

oh my. I will have to keep that in mind

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