ex boy friend

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Irriffglutt
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ex boy friend

Post by Irriffglutt » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:20 pm

I meet a girl , she was in a relation, after few months , she broke whit his fucking boyfriend , to night at last I`ll going to to dance whit her, we speak by phone, all right, after half hour she call me, … and said ….Hey Im sorry Im whit my ex boyfriend, tomorrow I will talk whit you , now Im lonely im my room thinking that she is whit her fucking boyfriend in her apartment , fucking life , fucking life , fucking life, damned life , i hate my life

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Re: ex boy friend

Post by Phenopath » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:27 pm

Good job Irriffglutt, it has the ring of truth.
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Franklin
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Re: ex boy friend

Post by Franklin » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:41 pm

Phenopath wrote:it has the ring of truth.
Seriously. Geez, I'm kind of depressed now.

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Re: ex boy friend

Post by zcarter80 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:19 am

Im Not, She wit me!! Muahahaha! But seriously a little realistic pain can go a long way, trust me i can relate.
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Re: ex boy friend

Post by strawman » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:16 am

Not 100 words. May be a bot. Now I know how Commander Adama felt.
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Re: ex boy friend

Post by zcarter80 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:44 pm

your right i count 86. could be a rookie drabbler mistake or could be a bot with all the grammar and syntax but i thought it was deliberate to mock an accent. who could know for sure?
If I wrote it you can read it unless you sound like Fran Drescher.

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Re: ex boy friend

Post by Rish Outfield » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:48 am

A bot? As in ro-bot?

Have I been in a cave for twenty years? When did computers get so smart?

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Re: ex boy friend

Post by Scattercat » Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:56 am

Spambots can generate some frighteningly appropriate text with the right algorithms.

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