Fallen Hero

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peteyfrogboy
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Fallen Hero

Post by peteyfrogboy » Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:15 pm

Billy looked up and saw Captain Universe standing on the edge of a rooftop. He took a breath and shouted, "You suck!"

Startled, Captain Universe turned around, lost his balance and toppled from the ledge. He hit the sidewalk with a thump, grappling hooks and suction cups scattering around him.

Billy ran up to fallen hero. "I'm so sorry! Are you okay?"

"I'll live," he groaned. "Why did you say that?"

"I thought you were cheating, you know, with super powers." He picked up one of the suction cups. "But you're really just like me, and that makes you cool."

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Re: Fallen Hero

Post by Scattercat » Tue Jan 11, 2011 5:51 am

Nice! A little awkward, but I approve of the sentiment.

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Re: Fallen Hero

Post by zcarter80 » Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:28 pm

cool drabble. one question, wheres he keep his anti-shark spray?
If I wrote it you can read it unless you sound like Fran Drescher.

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