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Fallen Hero

Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:15 pm
by peteyfrogboy
Billy looked up and saw Captain Universe standing on the edge of a rooftop. He took a breath and shouted, "You suck!"

Startled, Captain Universe turned around, lost his balance and toppled from the ledge. He hit the sidewalk with a thump, grappling hooks and suction cups scattering around him.

Billy ran up to fallen hero. "I'm so sorry! Are you okay?"

"I'll live," he groaned. "Why did you say that?"

"I thought you were cheating, you know, with super powers." He picked up one of the suction cups. "But you're really just like me, and that makes you cool."

Re: Fallen Hero

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 5:51 am
by Scattercat
Nice! A little awkward, but I approve of the sentiment.

Re: Fallen Hero

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:28 pm
by zcarter80
cool drabble. one question, wheres he keep his anti-shark spray?