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Buried Alive

Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:48 pm
by Hatching Phoenix
The hero opened his eyes to the sound of dirt hitting the lid of the coffin. He was in total darkness, buried alive. He'd have to act quickly.
Above ground, a group of men watched the unmarked grave.
"It's been four minutes. Maybe this time?" said a man with a shovel.
"Not today, you fiend!" the hero shouted and burst through the loose soil. Someone shouted, "Time!" An assistant fired a tranquilizer gun into the man's chest. He flopped over. "Okay, let's get him set up for the next run."
"Man," a trainer said. "The Olympics sure have gotten weird."

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:24 am
by Rish Outfield
Freaking great drabble!

I may have to record this one.

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:27 pm
by zcarter80
I hope you do, this looks like it would be amazing to hear. Down right knee slappin good drabble there friend.

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:36 pm
by strawman
Agree.
Does anyone remember seeing the box this came out of?

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 4:26 am
by Hatching Phoenix
Thanks! If you want to record any of my drabbles, go for it! :)

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 1:23 pm
by mrsmica
Ha! A great one indeed

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:46 pm
by Travelin Corpse Feet
Well you can tell from a glance that I can't walk
and I'm six feet down, no way to talk.
Nothing's loud cause I can't hear
Underneath this earthen barrier.

And now it's all right, it's O.K.
And you may look the other way.
Not too hard to understand
Two tons of dirt affects a man.

Whether you're a brother
Or whether you're a mother,
I'm buried alive, buried alive.
Feel the city walkin'
And the earth a shakin'
Cause I'm buried alive, buried alive.
Oh, oh, oh, god
Buried aliiiiiiiiiiive.

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:30 pm
by zcarter80
lol! shouldnt Ryan Reynolds be singing that?

Re: Buried Alive

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 6:52 pm
by mrsmica
Grooooooooooooooooooaaaaan

the recorded drabble really should end with that song