Snowpocalypse

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CLP
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Snowpocalypse

Post by CLP » Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:31 pm

Snow smothered the ground and choked the air. I should get home.

I spotted a figure lying on the snow.

When I approached, the figure rose, uttering a noise, the sound of tinkling shards of glass. I could see a fun-house mirror version of the world through the translucent blue of the figure.

Was it made of ice?

The soft crunching footsteps alerted me to more ice creatures lumbering toward me.

Helpless, I was encircled. Their ice hands clamped my limbs. They pinned me to the snow until I stopped shivering.

The last warm tear froze on my icy cheek.
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Re: Snowpocalypse

Post by mrsmica » Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:46 am

"I should get home" seems like the wrong tense

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Re: Snowpocalypse

Post by Mr. Tweedy » Wed Feb 02, 2011 10:42 pm

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