Bum's Rush

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Bum's Rush

Post by Scattercat » Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:15 pm

"Sir, you presume too much. Begone!" He swirled his bathrobe at me.

I sighed. "Jax, man..."

"King Jacksonia, Duke of Pineville and Protector of South Charlotte!"

"You're hallucinating, dude."

"Guards! Remove this wastrel."

"Okay, fine. I'm leaving. But I'm calling tomorrow and bringing you some help." I headed for the door.

Jackson laughed, waving his toilet-brush scepter. "No, not too roughly. He was once a friend. And now, let the joust begin!"

I closed the door and shrugged. My arms tingled with the touch of gauntleted hands. I was absolutely certain I did not hear anything like a whinny inside.

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Re: Bum's Rush

Post by strawman » Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:08 am

Great until the last sentence. Over my head.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

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Re: Bum's Rush

Post by Rish Outfield » Sun Feb 06, 2011 4:46 am

Shoot, another delightful drabble from you, sir. I hate to say it, but I must record this one as well. It's beyond my control.

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Re: Bum's Rush

Post by Scattercat » Sun Feb 06, 2011 5:23 am

As His Majesty commands...

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Re: Bum's Rush

Post by zcarter80 » Sun Feb 06, 2011 6:02 am

freakin nice. i could actually see the exchange. i gotta hear this one read, just waiting on Rish.
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Re: Bum's Rush

Post by Scattercat » Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:27 pm

Nice work on the vocals for this one. :-D

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