Where Shall I Turn?

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Where Shall I Turn?

Post by Scattercat » Wed Jun 29, 2011 4:24 am

When God came back, He wasn't what most people had been expecting. He packed up the planets and the stars, put the sun back in its box, and shook the ground out like a rug. He plucked out the trees and wrapped a rubber band around them, folded the mountains, and mopped up the sea with a sponge and a bucket. He coughed, then gathered up lives and souls, plucking them out and tossing them in glittering piles. When we shouted and cried out, He spared us a glance.

"Theft? Injustice?" He rumbled. "These are all mine. They always were."

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Re: Where Shall I Turn?

Post by ROU Killing Time » Wed Jun 29, 2011 4:43 am

Sounds more like a cosmic bully than a loving father.
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Re: Where Shall I Turn?

Post by strawman » Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:15 pm

At the end of the day, it all goes back in the box.
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Re: Where Shall I Turn?

Post by noctem93 » Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:36 pm

Heh heh, I really liked that one. God the janitor, and we his mess.
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