Wife of the Sea

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ktrex
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Wife of the Sea

Post by ktrex » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:30 am

Another salty day at sea, brightened by the sight of his wife waiting for him.

Her dark hair, flashing eyes, and sinuous movements had captivated everyone in the small town. She herself was quiet, but no one could stop whispering over her since the day she arrived. Town dances were dominated by men jostling to float her around the floor, hungering for a scrap of her beauty. All envied the poor fisherman, wondering why she chose him over everyone else.

Morning came, as always, and she slipped into the sea, greeted by the hoarse barks of her sea lion kin.
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Re: Wife of the Sea

Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:45 am

Interesting, but it could use some paragraph breaks.

Welcome aboard!

Now I'm torn between trying to make be-Sea-ality and bestiali-Sea puns. :? :mrgreen:

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Re: Wife of the Sea

Post by ktrex » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:46 am

Thanks! This is my first try, so I appreciate the help.
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