Touched

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Rish Outfield
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Touched

Post by Rish Outfield » Sun Jan 20, 2013 7:30 pm

The gypsy grabbed Daniel's wrist. "Say that again."

"Your country smells like socks and pee."

"Right." She pursed her lips. "Very well. I curse you. May you never find joy. May your life now seem hollow." Only then did she release his grip and move on.

"You bitch!" Daniel yelled. But she kept walking.

"What'd she say?" Carlos asked his friend.

"Dunno. But look what I swiped from her while she groped me."

He held up a shiny, bejeweled bracelet.

Carlos gaped. "That's awesome!"

"It seemed cool," Daniel muttered, disappointed. "But now I realize how lame it is. Let's go."

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Re: Touched

Post by PhineasQP » Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:13 pm

:lol:

I'm going to start using the phrase "smells like socks and pee". Thank you for that. :wink:
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Re: Touched

Post by uncre8d1 » Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:29 pm

So that's what she was saying.

Not that it matters...
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