Bearing Gifts (Good Samaritan Theme)

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Bearing Gifts (Good Samaritan Theme)

Post by Varda » Wed May 29, 2013 1:37 am

When Martin stopped to help a stranded stranger, he expected nothing in return. The stranger, a Hopi musician, had blown a tire en route to a wedding at the local reservation.

“Look, I don’t normally do this,” said the musician, “but please accept this wedding gift as a thank-you. I can get the happy couple another one later.” The stranger’s eyes glittered as he passed Martin a little gift box.

At home, Martin unwrapped the gift: a positive pregnancy test. An attached note read, “From Kokopelli, Trickster, God of Childbirth.”

Real funny, thought Martin. But then the morning sickness started.
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Post by strawman » Wed May 29, 2013 1:41 am

No good deed goes unpunished.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
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Post by chemistryguy » Wed May 29, 2013 2:12 am

See...that's the kind of thank you I've been waiting for.

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Post by Varda » Wed May 29, 2013 12:21 pm

strawman wrote:No good deed goes unpunished.
Perhaps it's a matter of perspective. In the long run, people always say children are one of the great gifts in life.

In the short run, the lack of a uterus is going to be a real problem. I like to think that Martin has found a new use for his appendix. :mrgreen:
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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Wed May 29, 2013 3:32 pm

Good story.

Of course, that's what you expect from some guy hitting himself with a rake!
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Post by MonsieurMoustache » Thu May 30, 2013 2:02 am

Really liked this one. Although I'm not sure if it's humourous or horror...Kokopelli is like a xenomorph with a repertoire of fart jokes.

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Post by Varda » Thu May 30, 2013 1:47 pm

Algernon Sydney is Dead wrote:Of course, that's what you expect from some guy hitting himself with a rake!
Holy crap! :shock: I never noticed that before! I have a feeling I'll never be able to un-see this, whenever I run into Kokopelli artwork...
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Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Thu May 30, 2013 2:41 pm

Varda wrote:I'll never be able to un-see this...
I get that a lot. You're welcome! :D

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Post by Flintknapper » Mon Jun 03, 2013 9:40 pm

I loved this one. Of course I am obviously fond of the southwest theme. As for the guy hitting himself with a rake, that made me spit up some water. I am actually going to tell that one to pueblo workers outside.... they are probably not going to want to talk with me again.

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Post by Varda » Wed Jun 05, 2013 2:22 am

Thanks, Flintknapper! Actually, I was inspired by your drabble about the Koshare. Ended up on an epic Wikipedia trip that led me to ol' Rake Face. Many thanks to you! :)
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