No Survivors

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DoctorBanzai
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No Survivors

Post by DoctorBanzai » Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:01 pm

“Be ye warned,” spake the grizzled old man from beneath his shadowing hood. “Once ye let them in, there’s nay getting’ them out.

“They’ll come fer ye, one by one at first, then in a herd, and ye’ll no survive. None have survived to date, I tell ye true.

“I seen it, I have. No survivors. All dead and ate by them critters.”

“All dead?” Paul asked. “Really?”

“Aye, ‘tis as I say,” the old man replied.

“So,” Paul grinned, “how come you’re here? I mean if everyone’s dead…”

“Oh,” he thought for a moment. “The tale does fall apart.”

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mrsmica
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Re: No Survivors

Post by mrsmica » Sat Jun 08, 2013 2:13 am

Ahahaha... I was expecting a description of the critters and got sucker punched with that ending!

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