Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

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Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by JMiriah » Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:47 am

I'm drawn by your smooth skin and perfect shape.
You're new to the city, fresh and innocent.
I whisper promises of melting candle wax and chocolate, and bring you home.
My hands brush your ribs and caress your firm, ripe curves.
I ease my tool into your welcoming flesh.
Buried to the hilt, I stroke your dripping slit.
Sweet and earthy, I lick your juices from my fingers.
I thrust hard with deliberate, panting rhythm until you burst; slick and wet, spilling seed.
I gut you, carve ecstasy into your face, and put your rotting flesh on display.
My pumpkin.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.

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Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by strawman » Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:02 am

"PLEASE, NO!!!", they begged. "Not in front of the children".
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Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by JMiriah » Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:04 pm

I did worry that this one might be a little inappropriate.
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.

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Post by Cwpants » Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:24 pm

Wow...made me blush!
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Post by chemistryguy » Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:53 pm

I figured it was going somewhere like that, but this was still fan-pump-tastic!

This drabble needs to be used this Halloween season.

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Post by strawman » Tue Sep 24, 2013 8:20 pm

Maybe on B Sides?
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Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by Varda » Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:54 pm

I like how the pumpkin works as both a phallic and a yonic symbol.

ETA: I'm not making the Simulation Theme connection, but if you meant Stimulation Theme... :oops:
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Post by gunsofchekhovia » Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:23 am

I can think of two acts it's simulating, fittingly and horribly intertwined. I agree with chemistryguy, this is a perfect Halloween piece for Drabblecast, and nowhere else, ever.

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Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by JMiriah » Wed Sep 25, 2013 3:42 pm

Thanks for the comments!
Varda wrote:I like how the pumpkin works as both a phallic and a yonic symbol.

ETA: I'm not making the Simulation Theme connection, but if you meant Stimulation Theme... :oops:
^_^ lol.

I don't think there's a particular Halloween themed Drabblecast or B-sides, but nice to hear it might fit if there were.

I was going for a Drabble that could be understood in two ways. I was also trying for morbid, disturbing humor. The Simulation theme probably is a stretch. I went with a dictionary definition "the imitation or feigning of something".
“It’s what you do with it that counts.” But, one look at his twabble convinced her. A double entendre’s size does matter.

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Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Post by gunsofchekhovia » Wed Sep 25, 2013 3:58 pm

No, Norm does a Halloween special every year. It's not straight horror, but it's horror-influenced weird. And so is your drabble.

Ahem: http://www.drabblecast.org/tag/halloween/

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