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Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 3:47 am
by JMiriah
I'm drawn by your smooth skin and perfect shape.
You're new to the city, fresh and innocent.
I whisper promises of melting candle wax and chocolate, and bring you home.
My hands brush your ribs and caress your firm, ripe curves.
I ease my tool into your welcoming flesh.
Buried to the hilt, I stroke your dripping slit.
Sweet and earthy, I lick your juices from my fingers.
I thrust hard with deliberate, panting rhythm until you burst; slick and wet, spilling seed.
I gut you, carve ecstasy into your face, and put your rotting flesh on display.
My pumpkin.

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:02 am
by strawman
"PLEASE, NO!!!", they begged. "Not in front of the children".

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 9:04 pm
by JMiriah
I did worry that this one might be a little inappropriate.

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 11:24 pm
by Cwpants
Wow...made me blush!

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:53 pm
by chemistryguy
I figured it was going somewhere like that, but this was still fan-pump-tastic!

This drabble needs to be used this Halloween season.

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 8:20 pm
by strawman
Maybe on B Sides?

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:54 pm
by Varda
I like how the pumpkin works as both a phallic and a yonic symbol.

ETA: I'm not making the Simulation Theme connection, but if you meant Stimulation Theme... :oops:

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2013 2:23 am
by gunsofchekhovia
I can think of two acts it's simulating, fittingly and horribly intertwined. I agree with chemistryguy, this is a perfect Halloween piece for Drabblecast, and nowhere else, ever.

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2013 3:42 pm
by JMiriah
Thanks for the comments!
Varda wrote:I like how the pumpkin works as both a phallic and a yonic symbol.

ETA: I'm not making the Simulation Theme connection, but if you meant Stimulation Theme... :oops:
^_^ lol.

I don't think there's a particular Halloween themed Drabblecast or B-sides, but nice to hear it might fit if there were.

I was going for a Drabble that could be understood in two ways. I was also trying for morbid, disturbing humor. The Simulation theme probably is a stretch. I went with a dictionary definition "the imitation or feigning of something".

Re: Homicidal Entendre (Simulation Theme maybe)

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2013 3:58 pm
by gunsofchekhovia
No, Norm does a Halloween special every year. It's not straight horror, but it's horror-influenced weird. And so is your drabble.

Ahem: http://www.drabblecast.org/tag/halloween/