White trash zombies.

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White trash zombies.

Post by revsleestaxx » Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:24 pm

There was a ruckus coming from the single wide trailer next door.

Edgar said, “Shit Betty they're at it again.”

“Yeah? Well don't talk to me abut it, I am busy, Jerry's on!”

Edgar mumbled something as he looked out the window at the single next door. He could see the shadows of movement and the noise was just getting worse.

This kind of crap happens when the checks get in. The whole park gets loud on the 1st and 15th of every month.

Everybody gets liquored up and gets rowdy.

But the zombies next door just creeped him out.
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Re: White trash zombies.

Post by gunsofchekhovia » Mon Oct 28, 2013 10:27 pm

I like the setup for this one, but the punch line is lacking. What, exactly, are the zombies doing that's so creepy? I mean, what makes them different from any other zombies, or any other white trash?

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Re: White trash zombies.

Post by revsleestaxx » Tue Oct 29, 2013 12:34 pm

kinda a play on racism. Obviously the zombies are no bothersome than the rest of the parks inhabitants they just bother Edgar by being.
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Re: White trash zombies.

Post by gunsofchekhovia » Tue Oct 29, 2013 1:06 pm

Ah! Carry on, then.

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