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The shorter version

Post by ROU Killing Time » Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:05 am

John and Martha Piece stood numbly in the rain at the state memorial honoring the sacrifice their son had made.

Excelling in all he attempted, he became the finest rapid deep space scouting pilot the field had ever known.

When bug-eyed-monsters from Zeta Centauri arrived and let humanity know it was go time, he was first in line to volunteer as a pilot in service of his planet and his people.

While the Secretary of Defense passed the folded flag to the grieving parents, the President laid a wreath in memory of earth's bravest son.

"In Eternal Memorium, Warren Piece"

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Post by Mr. Tweedy » Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:29 am

Booo!!! Booo!!

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Post by ROU Killing Time » Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:46 am

Mr. Tweedy wrote:Booo!!! Booo!!

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There can be no higher praise.

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