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Shellback
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Daddy

Post by Shellback » Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:22 pm

Daniel heard a giggle while rinsing out his hair. He looked down to see his three year old daughter looking up at him from around the edge of the shower curtain.

Giggling again, she cried out, “Mommy, mommy, daddy has a tail!”

Embarrassed, Daniel shouted, “Honey, Grace snuck into the bathroom!”

His wife came in and promptly directed Grace out.

“Maybe later I can get a peep show.” She said with a coy smile and downward glance.

Daniel’s embarrassment swelled yet again and as he reached to turn off the water, a long serpent-like tail swiftly coiled around his midsection.

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Re: Daddy

Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:48 pm

Welcome aboard, Shellback!

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Re: Daddy

Post by Shellback » Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:55 pm

Thanks. A little nerve racking posting my first story. Kinda like my first date... all butterflies and sweaty armpits.

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Re: Daddy

Post by Algernon Sydney is Dead » Fri Apr 04, 2014 7:58 pm

A fine first effort.
Alternate title: "Tattletale"

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Re: Daddy

Post by Shellback » Fri Apr 04, 2014 8:24 pm

LOL! How did I not think of that! Perfect.

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Re: Daddy

Post by Varda » Fri Apr 04, 2014 11:20 pm

Welcome to the forums, Shellback!

I'll admit, I cringed at the kid. The punchline was strangely relieving. Only at the Drabblecast...! :D
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Re: Daddy

Post by Shellback » Mon Apr 07, 2014 4:04 am

Thanks Varda!

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