Eternal Love ('Hopeless Romantic' theme)

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Eternal Love ('Hopeless Romantic' theme)

Post by jeetkuneluke » Tue Apr 15, 2014 1:37 am

Once a girl fell in love. Her lover died, and her heart broke.

Then he came back.

Her lover had dark hair, pale skin. He swore to her eternal devotion; she ran into his arms.

She came to the lover’s home, lay on the soft earth, and closed her eyes, eager for his touch. He leaned over her. Her heartbeat quickened; she held her breath. So close now.

He cracked her skull open and ate what was inside.

The lover cleaned the blood from his mouth, kissed the girl’s dead lips, and returned to the hunt. The night was young.

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Re: Eternal Love ('Hopeless Romantic' theme)

Post by strawman » Tue Apr 15, 2014 10:06 am

She was a blond, right?
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