Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

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Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby Sunner » Tue Oct 21, 2014 3:48 pm

This year, I was determined to be the first through the door and had camped out behind it for weeks. Behind me was a long line of the denizens of the netherworld, all patiently awaiting their chance to escape. One night a year that door opened for a short time and always in a different place. I hoped it would be where I could wreak havoc and invoke terror. The moment came, the door opened. A chorus of “trick or treat” blasted me from a group of human teenagers in red-splattered t-shirts and fake fangs. “Cool costume, dude!” said one.
**Sunner**

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place

Postby MonsieurMoustache » Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:10 pm

Hello, Sunner, and welcome to the forums.

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place

Postby Sunner » Tue Oct 21, 2014 6:13 pm

Thanks MonsieurMoustache...

...but I have been around, off and on, for a year and a half...
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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place

Postby pondspider » Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:07 pm

Sunner wrote:Thanks MonsieurMoustache...

...but I have been around, off and on, for a year and a half...

Ah, you must be one of them thar inter-dimensional transthingumies. :wink:

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place

Postby Sunner » Tue Oct 21, 2014 8:43 pm

pondspider wrote:
Sunner wrote:Thanks MonsieurMoustache...

...but I have been around, off and on, for a year and a half...

Ah, you must be one of them thar inter-dimensional transthingumies. :wink:



...yes, I only participate when I happen to be in this time/place/frameofmind...hopefully that will happen more often as my duties with Paratime Police taper off...
**Sunner**

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby MonsieurMoustache » Wed Oct 22, 2014 12:36 am

Sorry, Sunner. I misread your data on the side, don't ask me how. You've been here longer than me! Glad to hear the paratime police are giving you some time off.

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby tibbi » Wed Oct 22, 2014 5:09 am

Totally loved it.
And thus ends my $.02. :)

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby SpareInch » Thu Oct 23, 2014 4:55 am

And the best thing is, I saw the end coming... But it wasn't the end that arrived!

Loved it. :D
The truth may be out there, but lies are inside your head.

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby tibbi » Fri Oct 31, 2014 2:47 am

Last Halloween dribblecast recording for the year from me. This was a fun one.

http://www.dribblecast.org/2014/10/30/d ... ong-place/
And thus ends my $.02. :)

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Re: Right Time, Wrong Place (Halloween)

Postby Sunner » Fri Oct 31, 2014 1:32 pm

tibbi wrote:Last Halloween dribblecast recording for the year from me. This was a fun one.


THANKS Tibbi!

This is the first of mine to be dribbled on...if that is the right term. You did great job but is an odd feeling hearing what you wrote actually be read out loud by someone...

Thanks again!
**Sunner**


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