A Living Together

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A Living Together

Post by Horrorshow » Sat Mar 21, 2015 4:55 pm

After the removal of Denise’s womb, a thing made a nest inside her cavity. When Denise slept, the thing would painstakingly drag itself out of her vagina, pulling itself free with long, spindly, claw tipped limbs, before venturing into the night to feed.

In her dreams, Denise could see through the thing’s searching, manifold eyes. It hunted down rats and cats, cruelly slicing and rending them as they screamed, before it devoured what little corpus of them remained.

Before dawn, the thing would return to its nest. Denise would go to work that day feeling rested and satisfied.

And whole.

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Re: A Living Together

Post by miniscreams » Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:06 am

YIKES!!
"You're on earth. There's no cure for that." ~Samuel Beckett

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Re: A Living Together

Post by strawman » Wed Apr 01, 2015 9:56 pm

Note to self: cancel date with Denise.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
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Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: A Living Together

Post by Horrorshow » Sun Apr 05, 2015 11:37 am

Thank you for the comments, fellow drabblenauts. :)

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Re: A Living Together

Post by zcarter80 » Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:17 am

I am in love with your writing style and the picture painted here. This is mastery of a craft. I applaud you sir.
If I wrote it you can read it unless you sound like Fran Drescher.

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Re: A Living Together

Post by Horrorshow » Thu Apr 16, 2015 1:15 pm

zcarter80 wrote:I am in love with your writing style and the picture painted here. This is mastery of a craft. I applaud you sir.
I'm very flattered. Thank you for being so kind.

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Re: A Living Together

Post by zcarter80 » Tue Apr 28, 2015 6:41 am

More being honest but keep em coming!
If I wrote it you can read it unless you sound like Fran Drescher.

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Re: A Living Together

Post by Chairman Goodchild » Mon May 11, 2015 2:01 pm

Nice one. Well, not nice, but well-executed. You pack much into 100 words.

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Re: A Living Together

Post by Horrorshow » Sat May 16, 2015 2:10 pm

Chairman Goodchild wrote:Nice one. Well, not nice, but well-executed. You pack much into 100 words.
I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts, GC. Much obliged for the feedback.

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