Climbing

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Sunner
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Climbing

Post by Sunner » Thu Apr 23, 2015 2:30 am

I climb the cold, black, wrought-iron stair surrounded by an even colder fog that obscures all but a few steps above and below. I climb, and climb, and climb. At some point, I stop and step down but the fog does not recede. I reach down with my foot from the lowest step and feel no step below. Then, the fog starts creeping up towards me and I have to turn and continue climbing ahead of it. Faster and faster the fog rises, until I am running up the stair… until the stair ends...and the fog silently envelops me.
**Sunner**

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Re: Climbing

Post by strawman » Sat Apr 25, 2015 10:15 am

That's (metaphysical) life!
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
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