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Feel free to shred this drabble :-)

Post by Hamsterknit » Tue Jun 02, 2015 7:53 pm

Bella was sad. She picked a daisy.
“He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not.”
With a sob, she dropped the stalk to the ground and sank down next to it. Her life was meaningless.
She picked another daisy.
“He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not. He loves me. He loves me not.”
How could she go on like this? How could he torment her so? Why did all the daisies in her yard have an even number of petals?

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Re: Feel free to shred this drabble :-)

Post by strawman » Thu Jun 04, 2015 11:45 am

Bella was a nimrod.
Who taught her she had to start with "He loves me"?

Plenty of good relationships begin with "He loves me not".
After a few weeks in the cellar, they always say "I love you."
Or wish they had.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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Re: Feel free to shred this drabble :-)

Post by Hamsterknit » Thu Jun 04, 2015 4:35 pm

Too true! I had originally written this drabble on a Harry Potter forum when the forum changed everything to 'Twi-lite' for April Fools Day.

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Re: Feel free to shred this drabble :-)

Post by strawman » Thu Jun 04, 2015 7:26 pm

Now there's a marketing idea. Drabblecast should invade the Harry Potter forum en masse. Ride in on our Harleys and shoot up the place for a few days.
Never judge anyone until you have biopsied their brain.

"Be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle."
Known Some Call Is Air Am
Spoiler:
Non sum qualis eram = "I am not who I will be"

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