Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever

100 word stories. Post all you like, maybe we'll dip in and use yours?
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wanderingmarmot
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Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever

Post by wanderingmarmot » Fri Jun 26, 2015 2:16 am

Roxanne raised her katana and stepped over corpse after corpse. Someone grabbed for her but a quick dodge and upward strike ended with a severed arm dropping to the floor with a sickening slap. Roxanne dropped into splits and thrust her katana up under the ribcage of her final foe. Two guards appeared and slapped a bracelet on her wrist. She dropped her gaze to the bracelet and focused on the 10 printed in gold. She had succeeded. Daphne would have a Teddy Ruxpin 2.0 for Christmas and her ex Tony could never again say she was an unfit mother.

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Re: Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever

Post by Readerofmuch » Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:58 am

Interesting. I really like the twist. If you can cut out some of the out of place details this will be spectacular, if it isn't already.

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Re: Category: Self-Discovery Best Mommy Ever

Post by wanderingmarmot » Mon Jul 06, 2015 12:30 am

Thanks Readerofmuch. It was a fun one to write. I've just started writing drabbles and I find them challenging and a truckload of fun. My submissions are the ones that make me want to read them the day after I write them. When that happens, I copy & paste them in the DC forum. Glad you liked the twist.

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