Murder

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The Awesome Raccoon
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Murder

Postby The Awesome Raccoon » Thu Dec 10, 2015 4:04 pm

I'm adopted, I like it though. My family was nice. I had an older sister, and a baby brother. I'm telling you this because my family is dead..
The killer entered through the back door. I heard our parents yelp as he killed them. I walked to my sister's room and tried desperately to wake her up, but the killer entered. He killed her and I could do nothing but stand and watch. He looked at me and said, "Good boy." before shutting the door. I heard the baby scream.. And I looked at my useless paws and howled loudly.

JeremySzal
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Re: Murder

Postby JeremySzal » Sun Jan 03, 2016 7:51 am

That ending...ouch. Good job!

SpareInch
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Re: Murder

Postby SpareInch » Sun Jan 03, 2016 2:28 pm

Ruff break.
The truth may be out there, but lies are inside your head.


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