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What the Bouncer Saw

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2016 10:25 am
by flashj
The bouncer saw me head straight for the tequila.
The bouncer saw me shout "Last Man Standing!"
The bouncer saw Doyle shout back "Who you calling a man?"
The bouncer saw me match him shot for shot.
The bouncer saw me nail "Green Hills of Earth!"
Doyle was the only one who knew the words.
The Bouncer saw no point in resisting and joined in.
The Bouncer saw the drinks, the slime, the...the pseudopods.
The bouncer helped me pour Doyle into a cab. And I mean pour.
I need to go back and tip that bouncer.
And maybe recommend group therapy.

Re: What the Bouncer Saw

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2019 10:33 pm
by ZimmermansWay
Another fun visual. Can't quite put my finger on why your posts resonate with me but they do

Re: What the Bouncer Saw

Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2019 10:56 pm
by normsherman
Yah, I like these two. They're like, unspoken Choose Your Own Adventure drabbles!