Soon!

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Soon!

Post by ZimmermansWay » Thu Sep 13, 2018 2:57 am

His heart began to quicken…

He paused to relish the moment—cold steel only inches above her tender skin.

The thrill was arousing. It excited his loins: his breath grew shallow, his chest thundered.

He pondered whether the girl might have a family, if she had a lover, if she would be missed…

He licked his lips lasciviously behind his mask and steadied the blade for the kill—

“Are you ready to begin, Doctor?” the nurse interrupted from across the gurney, rudely breaking his concentration.

He frowned.

“Yes,” he muttered.

Not yet, he thought, peacefully. He smiled to himself.

But SOON!

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Re: Soon!

Post by lady lemonbalm » Fri Dec 07, 2018 3:11 pm

Bwahahahaha! Nice job, Zimmerman! Love it!

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Post by MementoHero » Tue Dec 11, 2018 1:18 am

Dig it a lot - I try to read these in Norm’s “Drabblecast” voice and it totally worked.

I couldn’t help but laugh though, and this has nothing to do on your part, but it reminded me of the South Park where Butters was taken to the vet because the other kids injured him and stapled dog ears on him. He escapes after about to be put down and the nurse asks the doctor if they she should look for him and he says “No, lets just murder one of these other dogs”.... I’m not sure what that says about me that I’ve always found that funny. I love animals, I swear.
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Re: Soon!

Post by ZimmermansWay » Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:10 pm

Bwahahaha! Anything that evokes South Park is a win in my book! Thanks!

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