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one night stand

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2019 1:28 am
by Nia_Zolanski
My view of the sketchy, hourly rate motel room disappears as a soft piece of black satin cloth covers my eyes.
“We wouldn’t want the rest of you to turn to stone, now would we?” Medusa with a hint mischief in her voice as she gently ties the blindfold around my face.

As I feel her climb on to the bed and hear her mane of serpents hiss with excitement, sudden horror and apprehension wash over me. Oh my god! Why hadn’t I thought of this before? If her hair is made of snakes...does the carpet match the drapes?

Re: one night stand

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2019 3:29 pm
by WeaselMaster
Oh. Oh oww. Yeah, that's an uncomfortable thought.

Re: one night stand

Posted: Sun Mar 31, 2019 1:25 am
by ZimmermansWay
Oh wow, this one made me simultaneously laugh and cry out loud! Well done sir!

That final punch line is a really well-crafted sentence with a lot of subtle nuances. I almost wanna get that tattooed somewhere...

Re: one night stand

Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2019 8:37 am
by MementoHero
Holy shit I love this.

Re: one night stand

Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 9:30 am
by LordKawaii
Nicely done! Good lead up to a fantastic payoff.

Re: one night stand

Posted: Sat May 11, 2019 3:16 pm
by D00MSDAY
This is just so awesome.

Re: one night stand

Posted: Fri Jun 07, 2019 6:20 pm
by The_Hol-Man
Ha, I like it! Great payoff, and it definitely makes one wonder what she had turned to stone in the first place. :lol:

--Andy

Re: one night stand

Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2019 7:32 am
by Elmaasheley
Wow great