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Last Night

Posted: Mon Mar 18, 2019 8:38 pm
by FordBenjamin
I drove her home and put the car into park as she came in for a kiss. My hand gently pressed to her shoulder slowing the advance.

I leaned my head down in the driver’s seat and unlocked the thin hasp just beneath my hairline. Her eyes widened as I slipped off my mask; human dimensions replaced by crocodile skin and an elongated snout.

She fumbled for the door handle and walked into the gleaming headlights. Click... a small whoosh narrated her skin falling away to reveal the granite scales of a Dragon. She moved closer to begin her feast.

Re: Last Night

Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2019 10:33 pm
by ZimmermansWay
I like it! Mind if I illustrate it?

Re: Last Night

Posted: Mon Apr 01, 2019 9:38 pm
by FordBenjamin
Be my guest. Can't wait to see your representation.

Re: Last Night

Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2019 10:11 pm
by MementoHero
I like the twist on the trope of the predator becoming prey, and it was entertaining and well written, so much that I kind of forgot it was a trope in the first place. Which is exactly how to do it. Good job.