No Rewrites (b-3)

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No Rewrites (b-3)

Post by Ichabod » Tue Sep 10, 2019 10:32 pm

“It’s taken awhile but it’s a good first draft.”

FIRST DRAFT?

“Well, yeah. Like not killing is great but we’ve got nothing about GENERAL violence, like head butts or groin kicks. Maybe we could swap that for ‘Honor Mom & Dad’.”

THAT ONE WAS YOUR SUGGESTION

“Yes, because kids are always ‘I want this’, ‘I want that’, really annoying.”

TELL ME ABOUT IT

“Add another? Have eleven rules? Who would care?”

COMMANDMENTS! AND I WOULD CARE!

“Ok, ok, ten it is. I’m sure we can tweak these into shape. It’s not like they’re written in stone, right? Oh… crap.”

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